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Thursday 5 July 2018

Life as a cat

I’m fast like a lion
I feel like I’m Puffy and Fluffy
When my owner comes home it feels like i'm flying and dying just like im crying
My owner treats me like a human
Feeding, Feeling, Falling
I like playing with wool
But I don’t like swimming in the pool
Because it feels like i'm a fool.
Boom, Pow.   
It feel like I have powers.
I smell like a flower.
I feel so happy.
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5 comments:

  1. Maya15 August 2018 at 08:32

    Hi Trent, Great effort in your Poem. I really like the way you included a few vocabulary that were not everyday ones. Good on you for that! Also Your poem did include a few emotions too. I really like that you are developing your knowledge in writing.

    Keep the good effort up!

    Yours sincerely,
    Maya.G

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  2. Simeon T22 August 2018 at 10:26

    Hi, Trent, I really enjoy reading your poem.

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    1. Trent M22 August 2018 at 10:39

      Thank you simeon for your commenting on my blog.

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  3. Alex C22 August 2018 at 10:33

    Hi Trent

    Great work

    Alex

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